Thursday, September 24, 2009

Metaphor Poem

A metaphor poem creates strong images by saying that one object is something else.
Please write a metaphor poem with 5 stanzas.

24 comments:

  1. Sky
    The sky is a clear ocean washing on the sand

    It is a blue thumb print on a yellow sheet of paper
    It is a blue football flying through the air

    It is a blue pen writing across a sheet of paper

    It is a blue background covering the screen

    Daniel

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  2. 1.(person)Hiroko
    Hiroko is a star shinning towards everyone

    She is a dictionary who give information

    She is an angel who is always kind

    She is a paint brush who is creative

    She is a rainbow who has different moods and feelings

    2.(object)What is ... The ocean?
    The ocean is a blue water in a cup crasing back and forth

    It is a blue sky covering the sun

    It is a blue wiggly line making it's way through the paper

    It is a blue thumb print on a sheet of paper

    It is a golden blue ink dropped from the sky of heaven

    BY: Pearl 7A ;)

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  3. What is Classical Music?

    Classical Music is a joyful poem
    Bringing relaxation to peoples hearts

    It is an angels song
    That everyone can hear

    It is a bright light in a dark world
    Bringing warmness to peoples hearts

    It is a colorful dot
    In the middle of a balck and white desert

    It is a piercing noise
    That most people enjoy

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  4. What is hair and how does it feel?

    My hair is a fuzz of wool
    stuck onto my head.

    It is a rainbow
    filled with as many colours as you want.

    It is a cloth of velvet
    touched by anyone.

    It is a shampoo
    whose scent follows you wherever you go.

    It is a string
    pushed and pulled by anyone

    By Sanjana 7E

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  5. The Moon

    The moon is a giant skippy ball
    bouncing around in a basketball court

    It is a delicious slab of cheese
    glowing in the dark

    It is an ancient lamp
    guiding us through the dark ages

    It is a big chew ball
    dripping down its glowng liquid

    It is a sphere that is representing a masterpiece
    which will be here for all eternity.

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  6. What is............moon

    It is a cheese
    That makes people hungry

    It is a gumball
    That sweeten your heart

    It is a yellow thumb print
    On a black sheet of paper

    It is a snowball
    In freezing cold winter

    It is a giant spotlight
    That gives you all the attention

    By: Hina 7E

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  7. What is.....a Dog?

    A dog is a pillow
    That barks and Sniffs

    It is a furry ball
    Pushed from the clouds

    It is a box of food
    Filling up every day

    It is a pot of gold
    At the edge of a rainbow

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  8. Pearl

    Pearl is an angel
    Looking down at me from heaven
    She is a flower
    Beautiful and blooming in the summer
    She is a pillow
    Giving me comfort and sweet dreams
    She is a high - heel
    Leading me to the right path
    She is a jacket
    Always keeping me warm and out of trouble!

    By: Hiroko 7A :)

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  9. What is... a cloud?
    A cloud is a sad grey smog
    Floating through the sky

    It is a big pillow
    soaring among the birds

    It is a white thumb print
    in the sky

    It is cotten from
    a flower

    It is a sheet of paper
    turning into different shapes

    By: Louis 7A

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  10. What is.....bubble gum?

    A bubble gum is a ball
    Which you will love

    It is an alien
    With many shapes and sizes

    It is a happiness
    Sticking to your lips

    It is a planet
    Exploding with taste

    It is a blue tack
    Only safer and tastier.

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  11. ISHAAN:

    The moon:
    The moon is a cheese ball.
    kicked into the pich black sky.
    it is surrounded by little shiny diomans.
    on a pale black sheet
    it is a plaet.
    throwing it;s glowing rays.
    it is a white apple.
    dropped from heaven.
    it is a crumpled up paper .
    on a plastic black sheet.

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  12. What is...Tree?

    The tree is a large umbrella
    Giving shade to the earth

    It is a gaint monster
    Standing high in the hot scorching sun

    It is a gigantic playground
    waiting for someone to climb on

    It is a amazing maze
    Hard to find the way out

    It is a natural palace
    Giving home for the creatures

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  13. What is.....the Moon
    The moon is an big cheese
    Beiing eaten by a mouse

    It is a quiet ball
    Supporting the big Earth

    It is a silver diamond
    Being protected from Medeorides

    It is a white thunb-print
    On a sheet of black paper

    It is a power-full ball
    making the Earth dark

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  14. What is ..... snow
    Snow is white cotton
    falling from the sky

    It is white paper
    stuck on blue paper

    It is white liquid
    spilt all over the sky

    It is white balls
    comming down form cellings

    It is white pearl
    that's comming from the sky

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  15. Ocean

    What is Ocean?
    Ocean is the beautiful blue sky floating above the city.

    It is a blue Heaven
    That is full of sea animals.

    It is a Black Hole
    If you fall in you don’t know the way to come out.

    It is a Number
    That does not End.

    It is a Play ground
    Where we play with friends and have fun.

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  16. What is.....a pen?
    A pen is a long stick
    Sailing across a letter head of a company.
    It is colorfull
    when scribbled down a page.
    It has a soft grip
    Leaving fingers unharmed.
    It is blue which is in demand
    For every signature or a signed deed.
    Its pen body is available in many designs
    Beautiful. dazzling, glittering are is shades.

    Yash Tekwani 7A English

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  17. What is an island?

    The island is a bubble,
    Floating on top of the water in my bathtub.
    It is the silver coin,
    Under the calm sea.
    It is the house,
    In the dry deserted land.
    It is the scoop of vanilla ice cream,
    Floating on top of my thick smoothie
    It is the orange pen in,
    The pencil case that is full of black pens.
    By : Nern Siriwat 7A

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  18. my metaphore poem

    Caitlin 7A

    A rainbow is cotton candy
    flying into a childs mouth

    it is a shooting star
    soaring through the sky

    it is a child drawing a picture with many bright colours

    it is a kid having fun with a friend

    it is a jewle sparkling on a neck

    A rainbnow

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  19. Ninad

    Clouds

    Clouds are fluffy cotton
    Hanging on the blue sky

    They are white snowflakes
    Covering the blue sky

    They are puffs of smoke
    Floating on the sky

    They are soft pillows
    That are used to sleep on

    It is white ghost
    Following you till the end

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  20. Moon

    The moon is a white dimond
    Floating across the black ocean

    It is a silver coin
    Sitting in a dark purse

    It is a disco ball
    Circling around the dark room

    It is a ping-pong ball
    Hit high into the sky

    It is a drop of milk
    On a dark blue sheet

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  21. What is...moon?
    The moon is a sphere cheese
    Having holes all around it

    It is a sun
    Giving light in the darkness

    It is a white boat
    Sailing through the ocean of darkness

    It is a old light bulb
    Trying to make its light to the other side

    It is a light yellow button
    On a giantic jacket

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  22. What is the moon?

    the moon is like a silver coin
    floating in the endless sea.

    It is a polostierine ball
    Floating in the emply sky.

    It is a cylender of white cheese
    falling from the heaven.

    I t is a golf ball
    being sucked into a black hole.

    I t is a slilver ring
    falling down a drain in slow motion.

    -Olivia 7E-

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  23. What is... school?
    School is being locked in prison,
    it is torture when you go to classes.
    School is running across the football field.
    It takes forever to get to classes.
    School is being punished,
    You are forced to do homework!
    B y Irin 7E

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  24. what is...cheese
    cheese is a golden globe,
    gray mice are biting through
    cheese is a yellow sun,
    filed with gaping holes
    cheese is a little toy,
    that you look through like a pair of binoculars
    cheese is a round lid
    that pours sesamee seeds
    cheese is a thin orange line
    it streches as much as a rubber band
    by kai 7E

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